So, I am pretty proud of what I have so far...I am brainstorming what I'll need to do to improve it:
make sure the transitions are clean and smooth, add better text that makes a bigger impact on viewers, I;ll also need to focus more on what I have written so far and where my research is going. Focus on human identity, computer consciousness/formation of identity, and create more of a sense of the "media change everything" ideas.
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Those are good ideas. I also think you need to create a more coherent and cohesive narrative running throughout the piece. You might need to take a break and go back to pencil and paper briefly just to get your narrative straight before going further. Right now it is not yet clear how all the pieces fit together, especially to people unfamiliar with the territory.
ReplyDeleteHere's a quick test to see if you have a good narrative. Grab a 7th Grader and explain your main point to her. That's the type of engagement, coherence, and cohesiveness your narrative needs.
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